It looks cleaner for sure Cherisa. As well as it being consistent in relationship with each other.
My only critique is the color for "Barbeque". The color choice makes it harder to read compared to "Andy's" and the crown illustration inside the blot. I think if you let the color for "Barbeque" be the same as "Andy's", it will stand out more. And it won't get lost in the design.
Have you tried printing it out with the recent color scheme for the type? It might still come out smooth for the current color of "Barbeque". If not, I would again say use the same color of "Andy's". :)
It looks much better! I agree with Tres though... I think the word 'barbeque' should be that cream color or something that is easier to read on top of the red.
On the back of the business card I maybe suggest that you take the address and phone # further from the edges, and maybe put the fork horizontally underneath "forks are for sissies" ... or play with the placement of the fork.
Also, I dont know if the fork on the stationery sheet works. Because if your message is that forks shouldn't be used while eating bbq, it's a little misleading to have it on the top of the stationery sheet.
good job! i love where this is going, and I think it'll end up being a very strong design.
Wow! so much better! who'd have thought? you are so quiet in class but you're a real dynamo when you are designing....great job. I like that you continue to work long after the critique and long after everyone has had their say...it's the sign of a true designer who is never quite happy with the end results. (maddening but true) glad you are continuing to carry both clients. very, very nice.
It looks cleaner for sure Cherisa. As well as it being consistent in relationship with each other.
ReplyDeleteMy only critique is the color for "Barbeque". The color choice makes it harder to read compared to "Andy's" and the crown illustration inside the blot. I think if you let the color for "Barbeque" be the same as "Andy's", it will stand out more. And it won't get lost in the design.
Have you tried printing it out with the recent color scheme for the type? It might still come out smooth for the current color of "Barbeque". If not, I would again say use the same color of "Andy's". :)
It looks much better! I agree with Tres though... I think the word 'barbeque' should be that cream color or something that is easier to read on top of the red.
ReplyDeleteOn the back of the business card I maybe suggest that you take the address and phone # further from the edges, and maybe put the fork horizontally underneath "forks are for sissies" ... or play with the placement of the fork.
Also, I dont know if the fork on the stationery sheet works. Because if your message is that forks shouldn't be used while eating bbq, it's a little misleading to have it on the top of the stationery sheet.
good job! i love where this is going, and I think it'll end up being a very strong design.
Wow! so much better! who'd have thought?
ReplyDeleteyou are so quiet in class but you're a real dynamo when you are designing....great job. I like that you continue to work long after the critique and long after everyone has had their say...it's the sign of a true designer who is never quite happy with the end results. (maddening but true)
glad you are continuing to carry both clients.
very, very nice.