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- Walter's Advertising for women's apparel
- Almost there...
- Reworking My Bookcover
- Ladies and Gentlemen I need your help
- CORRECTION TO BLOG BELOW
- My Earth Day Poster ....i think i like it!
- My specialty item
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- My photoshop skills.....or lack there of
- My first Logos ....used by a company
- Walters side shot
- Good Luck Everyone!
- The New Walter's Website
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i like where this is going, for sure. i think adding a photograph really helps the feel. weird nitpicky note: you misspelled supply in the paragraph. also, i don't really know if i like that paragraph aligned to the center. i think it should either be left justified or completely justified.
ReplyDeleteI'm lovin' the direction for Walter's, especially the 5.5 ad.
ReplyDeleteMy critique is the photo in the ad. I feel that it could be edited some more, so that it doesn't look so rough due to the Photoshop editing (layer masking I assume?). If that's the case, refining the edges will definitely smooth the edges out nicely. :)
Also, check the ppi resolution on the photo, just to see that it's 300 or not. Something to take a look at. :)
ReplyDeleteSee ya Tuesday!
Have you tried making the white paragraph in a more standard font? I feel like maybe it's competing with all the other the other type since it is so decorative.
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