OKAY SO I ADMIT THE LAST STATIONARY SET WAS A LITTLE MUCH. I THINK FOR THE STATIONARY I SHOULD TONE IT DOWN AND SAVE ALL THE COLOR AND DETAIL FOR THE ADS. SO THIS IS WALTER'S TONED DOWN WHAT DO YOU THINK......AND LET ME KNOW WHICH FRONT CARD YOU LIKE BETTER 1 OR 2. I LIKE 2.
First I think you should change the uppercase in your post to lowercase. Almost feels like you're shouting. Not that I think you are, but all caps in a post mostly represent shouting.
ReplyDeleteI like no. 2 as well. Although, I am not sure about all the different types being in the background, it becomes a distraction. Now, the white space helps bring out the client's name more compared to the first one.
I really like the direction for the bottom right design. However, the maroon red looks blinding. Maybe if you could tone it down, it would be more pleasant for viewing. Again, I do like the design direction and placement. :)
I really like the boldness of it. You have done a great job in promoting the "urban" design. This is so much better than what they currently have. The color scheme is great in promoting the variation to subjectivity. Everything is legible and i like the various fonts that you have incorporated into the back of the design as we watermark. My favorite one is the top left one.
ReplyDeleteWord to the wise...don't let anything interfere with your gorgeous logo. Texture can sometimes be seen as clutter which is not a strength.
ReplyDeleteBe bold, but be careful.